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caranfindel ([personal profile] caranfindel) wrote2015-01-30 02:46 pm

10.11 Drabble

100 words per episode...


Charlie was smart to run. But the answer isn’t in any book in Italy. It isn’t in eggwhite omelets and eight hours of sleep and “minding your quiet.”


The answer is in your hands. The answer is Charlie’s blood on your fists, your little sister pounded into the ground, the crack of breaking bone. The answer is your twitchy hands, your own personal demonic DTs, temporarily sated by violence, by her blood.


Is the next answer going to be your little brother? Your angel? An innocent bystander?


What was the question again?


Does it even matter any more?


Run, Charlie.


My drabbles are part of a challenge now. Read about it here.

frozen_delight: (angst)

[personal profile] frozen_delight 2015-01-30 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
What was the question again?
Does it even matter any more?


All the love for sad-crazy-confused-and-guilty-as-hell!Dean. <3

[identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Dean. The more we love him the more we pound on him.

[identity profile] madebyme-x.livejournal.com 2015-01-30 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Dark and ominous! You really captured Dean's inner thoughts so well, and the sense of foreboding is so strong. Great stuff!

[identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
Your dabbles are killing me. Such fantastic hurt morsels.

[identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Hurt morsels! I like that! Thank you. :-)

[identity profile] cassiopeia7.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is terrifying and awesome.

Is the next answer going to be your little brother? Your angel? An innocent bystander?

Chilling. Brava!

[identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] elwarre.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
your own personal demonic DTs

What a great line.

[identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com 2015-01-31 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :-)

[identity profile] cuddyclothes.livejournal.com 2015-02-08 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Late to the game - WONDERFUL! Perfect last lines.