10.21 Drabble

[caranfindel]

Part of my personal challenge to write a 100-word drabble for each episode; this one is for Dark Dynasty.

You circle him like prey, your voice deceptively conversational - this is how you handle cornered enemies. Dark thoughts, creepy visions, violent urges, same old same old, all coming into play now. He’s not chained in your dungeon, but he may as well be. His heartbeat accelerates like a trapped animal, and the Mark hums happily at the promise of violence.

His phone rings, and you say so help me… so help you who? God? God’s not going to help you. The only person who will help you is right here, and your fingers are itching to wrap around his throat.

Comments

[sanshal.livejournal.com]

I'm yet to see S10.E21(hasn't aired in my country yet :(...); but Dean's mindset... *shiver*

[quickreaver.livejournal.com]

Yup yup. I LIKE.

[frozen_delight]

I love this so much! That scene was deliciously hot and scary, and you've perfectly managed to capture the tension of it! *wild applause*

[cuddyclothes.livejournal.com]

Well done!

[dreamsofspike.livejournal.com]

You have captured that scene really well... it was so intense and scary and Dean was disturbingly menacing considering that it was SAM he was dealing with. :-S

Very nicely done.

[tifaching.livejournal.com]

the mark hums happily at the prospect of violence ...Yes. I was scared for Sam a little there.

[fanspired]

Excellent. Especially that last line.

[madebyme-x.livejournal.com]

I'm so happy that you picked this scene - I loved this!!! You really captured the tension and the ominous feeling of the scene, because I was fearful for Sam. And that last line was perfection!