10.21 Drabble

[caranfindel]

Part of my personal challenge to write a 100-word drabble for each episode; this one is for Dark Dynasty.

You circle him like prey, your voice deceptively conversational - this is how you handle cornered enemies. Dark thoughts, creepy visions, violent urges, same old same old, all coming into play now. He’s not chained in your dungeon, but he may as well be. His heartbeat accelerates like a trapped animal, and the Mark hums happily at the promise of violence.

His phone rings, and you say so help me… so help you who? God? God’s not going to help you. The only person who will help you is right here, and your fingers are itching to wrap around his throat.

Comments

[sanshal.livejournal.com]

I'm yet to see S10.E21(hasn't aired in my country yet :(...); but Dean's mindset... *shiver*

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

I think you're going to like that part. :D

[quickreaver.livejournal.com]

Yup yup. I LIKE.

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[frozen_delight]

I love this so much! That scene was deliciously hot and scary, and you've perfectly managed to capture the tension of it! *wild applause*

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

It WAS hot, wasn't it? Thank you! :-)

[cuddyclothes.livejournal.com]

Well done!

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[dreamsofspike.livejournal.com]

You have captured that scene really well... it was so intense and scary and Dean was disturbingly menacing considering that it was SAM he was dealing with. :-S

Very nicely done.

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

It's always awesome when he's menacing, but doing it to Sam just adds another layer of emotion! Thanks for the comment. :-)

[tifaching.livejournal.com]

the mark hums happily at the prospect of violence ...Yes. I was scared for Sam a little there.

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

I kinda wish his phone hadn't rang...

[tifaching.livejournal.com]

Oh, god, me too. But I think when Dean finds out about Rowena things might just get a tad dicey too. We will hope for no interruptions, though with the addition of dead Charlie Dean be even closer to snapping than he was last ep. And he was pretty freakin' close then.

[fanspired]

Excellent. Especially that last line.

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[madebyme-x.livejournal.com]

I'm so happy that you picked this scene - I loved this!!! You really captured the tension and the ominous feeling of the scene, because I was fearful for Sam. And that last line was perfection!

[caranfindel.livejournal.com]

Thanks!