You conveyed so much with only dialogue, which you nailed for both boys! I loved the gentle banter and the game playing (what perfect Winchester car game!) I loved how you brought up Dean's immortality, and how he wants to test it, especially how Sam and Dean both dealt with the conversation - it was so in character.
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Date: 2015-02-18 10:59 am (UTC)You conveyed so much with only dialogue, which you nailed for both boys! I loved the gentle banter and the game playing (what perfect Winchester car game!) I loved how you brought up Dean's immortality, and how he wants to test it, especially how Sam and Dean both dealt with the conversation - it was so in character.
What a fabulous read! This is genius!