Totally loved this! My heart was aching - not just from the story but from the nostalgia of it all - thinking back at this devastating time in their lives. You really captured that perfectly. I particularly liked the way you handled their differing point of views - never giving definitive answers to anything, but rather exploring their fears at the uncertainty of it all. The case file was intriguing and would work beautifully as an episode.
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Date: 2016-08-01 02:16 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for creating and sharing.
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