Ficlet: Of flesh and blood I'm made

[caranfindel]

No new episode to talk about, so here's a little ficlet instead...

Of flesh and blood I'm made
Genre: Gen, hurt!Sam, angst, hell trauma
Length: About 600 words
Characters: Sam Winchester, Dean Winchester
Synopsis: Dean's body was rebuilt when he was raised from Hell, but Sam's wasn't. What if, once he got his soul and his memory back, his body couldn't forget what had happened in Hell? How high would his pain threshold be?

~~~

"I'm just going to tuck this warmed blanket around you," she says. (Ashley, her name is Ashley; the whiteboard on the wall across from him says Baptist Medical Center Emergency Department and Your nurse is Ashley and Today is Wednesday the 22nd and other things they think he wants to know.)

(You are topside. That's what Sam wants to know.)


"I know you've got to be freezing," she continues. (Ashley, she's Ashley. Remember. Focus.) He looks at her, puzzled. Freezing? He's a little cold, maybe, but not uncomfortably so. Falling into a frozen lake isn't cold. Not like the feeling of Lucifer pressed against him, hand plunged into his chest and curled possessively around his heart, turning his blood to ice in his veins. Compared to that, nothing up here is actually cold.

Behind Ashley, Dean raises his eyebrows briefly and then looks pointedly at the skin of his exposed arm. Oh. Goosebumps. Empirical evidence that he is, in fact, cold. But that's good. Empirical data is good. It's better than trying to guess what he's feeling.

"Thanks, Ashley," he says. He smiles. He is okay. He is okay.

"Now, how bad is your pain, on a scale of one to ten? If one is no pain at all, and ten is the worst pain you can imagine, where would you put your current level of pain?"

(He doesn't imagine, he remembers, and he is struck dumb with the effort of not remembering.)

When he doesn't immediately answer, Ashley says "It's okay. Don't worry that we're not going to give you anything if you don't give us the right number. My goal is for you to have no pain at all. So, if one is no pain, and ten is being boiled in oil, how much pain are you in right now?

On the whiteboard, a row of cartoon faces demonstrates pain levels one through ten. Face number one is smiling, happy. Face number ten has a mouth curved down into a dramatic frown, fat cartoon tears leaking from its eyes.

(Its eyes have not been gouged out. Its mouth is not stretched open in a desperate agonized scream.)

Ashley doesn't know what being boiled in oil feels like, and neither does face number ten, but Sam does. If being boiled in oil is a ten on Ashley's scale, having your spine ripped out through your mouth must be a fifteen. Having slivers of glass scrape down every nerve in your body simultaneously is a twenty.

(Sam can count very, very high.)

How does this scale calibrate to real pain? What is a broken arm supposed to feel like? Should falling through ice into a frozen lake afterward make it hurt more, or less?

Behind Ashley (her name makes him shudder, ash and brimstone and fire and ice and claws and teeth), Dean clears his throat, holds his hands at waist level. Five fingers extended on his left hand, one on his right.

"Six," Sam says. "I'm at a six." Dean smiles, gives him a quick nod. (You are topside .)

Face number six isn't smiling. Sam fixes his mouth into a slight frown to match face number six.

"All right," Ashley says. "I'm going to talk to the doc, and he'll order something for your pain. Then we'll get you in for X-rays."

Sam nods, tries to concentrate on the distant ache of his broken bones and not the sharp sense-memory of being burned boiled skewered shattered dismembered.

"Thank you, Ashley."

He is okay.

~~~

(Inspired by a nurse who really did use the "boiled in oil" analogy. The title is from Human by the Human League.)

Comments

[stir-of-echoes.livejournal.com]

My heart is breaking. This was wonderful!

[madebyme-x.livejournal.com]

Seriously? A nurse really used that analogy. Yikes. And here was me just about to yell at Ashley for being unnecessarily graphic in front of our poor Sam.

This was so darn perfectly prefect. The way Sam can't answer the question, and Dean has to prompt him, and then he has to match his face to the picture on the wall *clutches heart* Oh Sam!!!

Thank you for sharing :)

[cuddyclothes.livejournal.com]

WOW.

[fanspired]

You've perfectly demonstrated the problem with that whole 1-10 crap.

This is so good, in so many ways.

[tabaqui]

Ah, man, that is.....
That just *hurts*.

And Dean trying to do anything to just get him through it, and Sam just *barely hanging on*.....
Damn.

Good, good stuff.

[borgmama1of5.livejournal.com]

Dear god, this hurt to read.

Thank you...I think...

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Dean sneakily showing Sam six fingers killed me. And then Sam arranging his face to match the expression of number six struck me as so sad and too believable.

[herminekurotowa.livejournal.com]

[zubeneschamali.livejournal.com]

Man, this is heartbreaking. And so in character for both of them. Really nice little fic.

[tyrsibs.livejournal.com]

Wow. "There are no words." And what numbers can compare. This feels heart-wrenchingly true to Sam's experience. Thank you for sharing this!

[kazluvsbooks.livejournal.com]

Ugh I love this!! I can never have enough hell trauma Sam!

[finchandsparrow.livejournal.com]

Oh man, this is both quiet and deep, both simple and incomprehensible in its sadness. I really like how the parenthetical bits work not so much as interruptions or even asides, but as surges of a persistent undercurrent. And Dean signalling the appropriate number to Sam—that little moment has such an impact. </3 Lovely stuff.

[hollyhobbit44.livejournal.com]

This is so heartbreakingly perfect! I love it!

[twigletmoo.livejournal.com]

Yes, so much yes! Because of course Sam is gonna have a skewed perspective on how much pain he should be in. I loved that Dean just gets where he's at too, helping him out with what is an acceptable response to the 0-10 question.