10.16 Drabble

[caranfindel]

Part of my continuing challenge to write 100 words for each episode in S10. Here's the drabble for 10.16; "Paint it Black."

Bless me father, for I have sinned.

I’ve lied and stolen and killed and blasphemed; I’ve disobeyed angels and archangels and God and my own father. But I’d do all of that again.

My real sins? I’m responsible for the deaths of good people. I tortured souls in Hell. I betrayed my brother, God, so many times. I’ve taken on the Mark of Cain and I’ll kill my best friend and my brother unless I force them to kill me first.

But this spirit doesn’t care about my real sins.

(Smile and do your goddamn job.)

“It's the women, father.”

Comments

[ash48.livejournal.com]

Perfect. Thank you.

[citrusjava.livejournal.com]

Ouch.
Nice, and spot on.

[amberdreams.livejournal.com]

Yes - what must have been going through his mind, for sure...if he'd even admit it to himself.

[anactoria.livejournal.com]

This must've been exactly what was going on in Dean's head in that scene. <3

[frozen_delight]

“It's the women, father.”
*curls up in a ball and cries*

Perfect and gutwrenching as always.

[madebyme-x.livejournal.com]

Perfect! You skillfully whittled that scene down to its bare bones. Wonderful!