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A little (270 word) drabble; a coda for 11.09.



He doesn’t hurt him at first. Doesn’t even want to hurt him, really. Sam Winchester is an errant child, a hapless puppet caught in the middle of a scenario he can’t possibly comprehend. So he maintains Nick’s familiar form (a troublesome task, twisting his true form into this tiny, plebeian shape), contemplates whether he’ll punish or reward that little red-haired witch when he gets out, and pries into the chinks in Sam’s armor, the ones he’s already so well acquainted with. He knows emotional torture will break him before physical torture, and he’s got the tools for that.


But his logic, flattery, persuasion, and threats have no impact. The fool stubbornly stands in the corner of their tiny cage, repeating the same insufferable no, and finally Lucifer’s control shatters. He explodes into his true form and howls his rage. There is an answering shriek of agony and terror, and when he folds himself into Nick’s form again, he sees Sam crumpled on the floor, eyes and ears bleeding, every bone in his body snapped in two.


“Oh, Sam,” he says. “I’m sorry. I lost control there for a minute. I didn’t mean for that to happen.” He kneels next to the broken man. “Don’t worry, I can fix this.” He starts with the tiny bones in his foot, slowly and painstakingly repairing each one. Slowly, slowly. “Of course, it would be faster from the inside. It’s going to take hours this way. Maybe days.” As he listens to Sam Winchester whimper in fear and pain, he thinks on the little witch again and decides, yes, it will be a reward.


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(FYI, the title is from O Holy Night, one of my favorite Christmas carols.)

Date: 2015-12-18 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quickreaver.livejournal.com
My heart is full. (And horrified, but yanno...)

Date: 2015-12-18 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
Well, that's always my goal. ;-)

Date: 2015-12-19 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zara-zee.livejournal.com
Yikes! I love that carol too and you just managed to make it really sinister! Well done! :)

Date: 2015-12-20 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2015-12-19 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anactoria.livejournal.com
Ouch! This is wonderful.

Date: 2015-12-20 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2015-12-19 07:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kalliel
Terrifying and fantastically fantastic. The notion of putting Sam back together from splinters, the agony of that (on Sam's end) and the dark temptation of such a process being easier from the inside is oh so wonderful. <33 Love this, bb.

Date: 2015-12-20 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's good to hear from you; how are you doing?

Date: 2015-12-21 08:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kalliel
Ehhhh well, I will be fine! XPP <3

Date: 2015-12-21 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madebyme-x.livejournal.com
Ouch, this is all kinds of hurty wonderful! Lucifer taking his form, and then putting Sam back together again, bone by broken bone, and then a temping vessel offer - yikes!!!

So much horror in so few words. Thank you for sharing :)

Date: 2015-12-22 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caranfindel.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2016-04-08 06:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladyjane
*whimper* Poor Sammy. *pets Sam delicately on the ear lobe, using pinkie finger*

Lucifer is just so monstrously manipulative, it's terrifying and I can't take my eyes off him. (Yup, your descriptions are just that good.) Lucifer reminds us, even more than Naomi, that Angels are not human, they are alien in their thinking. Also, that he's bat-shit crazy, psychotic, and possibly the first schizophrenic.)

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